CELPIP Writing Task 2 · survey response

Survey: longer recreation centre hours or more street trees

The City of Maplewood ended the year with an unexpected budget surplus of $1.2 million. City council has decided to spend the money on one project that benefits residents and has launched an online survey to gather public feedback before making a decision.

Which project should the city fund with its budget surplus?

Option A: Extend recreation centre hours. Keep the city's three recreation centres open until 11 p.m. on weekdays and add early-morning hours on weekends for the next three years.

Option B: Plant street trees. Plant about 2,000 new trees along residential streets and in school yards, including watering and care for the first five years.

Choose the option you prefer and explain why. Write about 150–200 words.

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Sample at about CLB 7185 words · chooses B: Plant street trees

I think the city should choose to plant the street trees. In my opinion this project is better for everyone in the city, not only for some people.

First, trees make our city more beautiful and more green. In my street there is almost no trees, so in summer it is very hot and there is no shade when I walk with my kids to school. If the city plant trees near schools, the children can play outside in the shade. Also trees make the air more clean and this is good for the health.

Second, trees will stay for long time. The recreation centre hours is only for three years, after that the money is finish. But trees can live fifty years or more, and the city will take care of them in first five years. I think this is a good use of money.

Of course, longer hours in recreation centre is good for people who work late. But not many people go to the gym at 11 p.m. Trees are for all people, young and old.

So I vote for option B.

Why about CLB 7: The choice and reasons are clear, but the support is general and the comparison with the other option is short. Errors such as "more green", "there is almost no trees", "for long time" and "the money is finish" are frequent.

Sample at about CLB 9170 words · chooses A: Extend recreation centre hours

I would choose option A, which is to extend the hours of the recreation centres. I think this option would be more useful for the people in our city.

The main reason for my choice is that many people work during the day and they cannot go to the recreation centres when they are open. For example, I work until 7 p.m. most days, and by the time I get home and eat dinner the recreation centre is already closed. If the centres were open until 11 p.m., I would be able to go swimming or use the gym after work. I think there are many other people in the same situation as me.

Also, having more hours in the weekend mornings would be good for families. Parents could take their kids to the recreation centre early in the morning before doing other activities.

Planting trees is also a good idea, but I think the recreation centres would help more people right now. That is why I prefer option A.

Why about CLB 9: A clear choice with a relevant personal reason. The weekend point and the comparison with trees are brief and general; "in the weekend mornings" should be "on", and a comma is missing after "eat dinner".

Sample at about CLB 11180 words · chooses A: Extend recreation centre hours

My vote goes to extended recreation centre hours. For households juggling late shifts and childcare, access to existing facilities would be a practical return on the surplus.

My neighbour finishes her warehouse shift at eight, and I sometimes look after her daughter. Last Tuesday she reached the centre shortly before closing, then went home because a hurried swim hardly justified the admission charge. An eleven o'clock closing time would let her eat, change and exercise without treating every minute as a deadline. Across three centres, the proposal could accomodate several different neighbourhoods rather than concentrating the benefit in one location.

Early weekend opening matters to my family too. I could visit while my partner stayed with our daughter, avoiding the need to arrange childcare during the day. Council should check which activities late visitors actually want and schedule staff accordingly.

Our street would certainly welcome shade trees. Nevertheless, a five-year care commitment does not solve our immediate access problem. I favour the three-year extension, with attendance and staffing costs reviewed annually so a useful service can become a sustainable one.

Why about CLB 11: The response links precise household needs to both proposed schedules and includes a practical review condition. "Accomodate" is misspelled; the argument is otherwise developed and natural.

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