CELPIP Writing Task 2 · survey response

Survey: free swimming lessons for children or fitness classes for seniors

Your community centre has received a donation of $40,000. The board will use it for one new free program and wants to hear from local residents first.

Which free program should the community centre offer with the donation?

Option A: Swimming lessons for children. Free swimming lessons with certified instructors for 300 children aged 5 to 12 over the year.

Option B: Fitness classes for seniors. Free exercise classes twice a week for adults over 65, including balance and strength training, for the whole year.

Choose the option you prefer and explain why. Write about 150–200 words.

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Sample at about CLB 7160 words · chooses A: Swimming lessons for children

I think the community centre should choose the swimming lessons for children.

Swimming is a very important skill, especially in Canada because there is many lakes and people go to cottage in summer. Every year we hear news about kids who drown. If children learn to swim when they are young, they will be more safe all their life.

Also swimming lessons are expensive now. In my family we have three kids and for one session it costs more than $100 for each child. We can't pay it for all of them, so only my oldest son took lessons. Many families in our area have the same problem, specially new immigrants.

The fitness classes for seniors is also good idea. My mother is 70 and she likes exercise. But I think seniors can do exercise by walking in the park or at home with videos, they don't need a special class so much.

For these reasons, I choose option A.

Why about CLB 7: Safety and cost are clear reasons, but the response against the other option is thin. Errors such as "there is many lakes", "go to cottage", "more safe", "specially" and "The fitness classes ... is also good idea" are noticeable.

Sample at about CLB 9167 words · chooses A: Swimming lessons for children

I would choose the free swimming lessons for children.

The most important reason is safety. Canada has thousands of lakes and rivers, and many families spend time at the beach or at cottages in the summer. Knowing how to swim can really save a child's life. I think every child should have the chance to learn this skill, not only children whose parents can pay for it.

Swimming lessons have become quite expensive, and for families with two or three kids the cost adds up quickly. In our neighbourhood, there are many new immigrant families who may not have learned to swim in their home countries, so free lessons would be very helpful for them.

The fitness classes for seniors would also be good, and I know exercise is important as people get older. However, I think there are more low-cost options for seniors already, such as walking groups in the mall.

For these reasons, I believe swimming lessons would be the best use of the donation.

Why about CLB 9: Fluent and well organized, with reasons that fit the community. The comparison with the seniors' program is brief and not supported with details; "in the mall" would usually be "at the mall".

Sample at about CLB 11175 words · chooses B: Fitness classes for seniors

I'd recommend putting the donation toward free fitness classes for seniors.

Falls are one of the most serious yet preventable threats to older adults. My father, who is seventy-eight, slipped in his kitchen last spring and fractured his hip; his recovery took months, and he has never fully regained his confidence. His physiotherapist told us that regular balance and strength exercises could have reduced that risk considerably. Twice-weekly classes are exactly that kind of prevention, and they cost a fraction of a single hospital stay.

The social side matters as well. Many seniors in our area live alone, and a class twice a week offers routine, friendship and a reason to leave the house, especially in winter, when isolation sets in.

Children's swimming lessons are undoubtedly valuable, but they are also the program most likely to attract other support, the city already subsidizes lessons for low-income families, and several service clubs sponsor them. Seniors' fitness rarely gets that kind of attention.

For that reason, Option B would fill a gap that nobody else is filling.

Why about CLB 11: A moving example, a cost argument and a sharp point about other funding make this persuasive. The comma before "the city already subsidizes" should be a colon or a full stop.

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