CELPIP Writing Task 2 · survey response

Survey: faster sidewalk clearing or faster plowing of side streets

Your city plans to spend more on snow clearing next winter, but the extra budget can only cover one improvement. The city has asked residents to choose in an online survey.

Which snow-clearing improvement should the city fund next winter?

Option A: Clear sidewalks faster. Sidewalks and bus stops would be cleared within 24 hours of a snowfall, instead of up to three days.

Option B: Plow residential streets sooner. Side streets in residential areas would be plowed within 12 hours of a snowfall, instead of waiting until main roads are finished, which can take up to two days.

Choose the option you prefer and explain why. Write about 150–200 words.

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Sample at about CLB 7158 words · chooses B: Plow residential streets sooner

I think the city should choose option B and plow the residential streets more faster.

In my street, after big snowfall the plow come only after two days. During this time it is very hard to drive. Last winter my car was stuck in front of my house and my neighbour and me had to push it. I was late to work two times because of this problem. Many people in my area use car for go to work, because the bus is not close.

Also, it is important for safety. If the street is full of snow, ambulance or fire truck can't come quickly when there is emergency. This is very dangerous, specially for old people.

I know sidewalks are important too, for people who walk or take the bus. But I think people can walk on the snow more easy than a car can drive. So for me option B is better choice for our city.

Why about CLB 7: The choice is clear and supported with a personal example and a safety point, but the reasons are not developed in depth. Errors such as "more faster", "In my street", "use car for go", "specially" and "more easy" are frequent.

Sample at about CLB 9164 words · chooses A: Clear sidewalks faster

I would choose Option A, clearing sidewalks and bus stops faster.

First, many people in our city don't drive. Students, seniors and people who can't afford a car depend on walking and taking the bus. When the sidewalks are covered with snow for three days, it is very difficult and even dangerous for them to get around. Last winter, I saw an older man fall near the bus stop on my street because the snow had turned into ice.

Also, if the bus stops are not cleared, people have to wait on the road or climb over big piles of snow to get on the bus. This is especially hard for parents with strollers and people in wheelchairs.

Of course, plowing residential streets sooner would also be useful for drivers. However, cars can usually still move slowly on snowy streets, but a person who falls on the ice can get seriously hurt.

For these reasons, I think clearing sidewalks faster is the better choice.

Why about CLB 9: Clear, fluent and well organized, with a relevant example. The "First ... Also" structure is simple and the points stay general; "However ... but" uses two connectors where one is enough.

Sample at about CLB 11185 words · chooses A: Clear sidewalks faster

I'd urge the city to put the money into faster sidewalk and bus-stop clearing.

A three-day wait might be a nuisance for drivers, but for anyone on foot it can be genuinely isolating. My neighbour, who is eighty-one and walks with a cane, stayed indoors for most of last February because the path to her bus stop was a ridge of packed ice. She missed two medical appointments, which for a senior is not a minor inconvenience.

The same problem affects far more people than we tend to imagine: parents pushing strollers into the road because the sidewalk is impassable, wheelchair users who simply cannot reach the bus, students waiting in the slush beside traffic. Clearing within 24 hours would also make transit a realistic option in winter, which may take a few cars off of the roads.

I don't dismiss the value of plowing side streets sooner; emergency access matters. Still, most residential streets remain passable with careful driving and winter tires, whereas an icy sidewalk leaves a pedestrian with no alternative.

For that reason, Option A would do more good for more residents.

Why about CLB 11: A vivid example, a wide view of who is affected and a fair treatment of the other option make this persuasive. "Off of the roads" is informal; "off the roads" is better.

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