CELPIP Writing Task 2 · survey response

Survey: winter carnival or summer music festival for a small town

The small town of Riverbend, Ontario, has enough funding to support only one large festival each year. The town's tourism committee has posted a survey on its website asking residents which event they would prefer.

Which annual festival should the town fund?

Option A: Winter carnival. A weekend in February with ice sculptures, a skating trail, sleigh rides and outdoor food stalls.

Option B: Summer music festival. A three-day event in July featuring local and regional bands on an outdoor stage by the river.

Choose the option you prefer and explain why. Write about 150–200 words.

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Sample at about CLB 7172 words · chooses B: Summer music festival

I think the town should give money to the summer music festival. I believe more people will come to this festival than the winter carnival.

In July the weather is warm and nice, so people like to be outside. Families can sit on the grass by the river and listen the music together. In February it is too cold, many people don't want to go out, especially old people and small children. Also the weather in winter is not sure, if it is too warm the ice sculptures will melt.

The music festival is also good for the local bands. In our town there are many young musician but they don't have many chance to play in front of big audience. This festival can help them to be more famous. Also the bands from other cities will bring tourist to our town and they will spend money in restaurants and hotels.

The winter carnival sounds fun, but I think it is more risk. So my vote is for the summer music festival.

Why about CLB 7: The choice is supported by several reasons, but they are listed rather than developed. Errors such as "listen the music", "many young musician", "many chance", "bring tourist" and run-on sentences are frequent.

Sample at about CLB 9164 words · chooses A: Winter carnival

In my opinion, the town should fund the winter carnival. I have lived in this town for many years, and I feel that there is not much to do here in the winter.

During the winter months, most people stay inside their homes and the downtown area is very quiet. A winter carnival would give people a good reason to go outside and enjoy the winter. Activities like skating, sleigh rides and ice sculptures would be fun for the whole family, and they are things that we cannot do in summer.

The carnival would also be good for the local businesses, because winter is usually a slow season for them. The food stalls and visitors would bring more money into the town.

A summer music festival would also be enjoyable, but there are already a lot of things to do in summer, like going to the beach or camping.

That is why I think the winter carnival is a better choice for our town.

Why about CLB 9: Clear and well organized, with reasons that fit the question. The support is general rather than specific (no examples from the writer's own experience), and "winter" repeats; a comma is missing after "stay inside their homes".

Sample at about CLB 11186 words · chooses A: Winter carnival

I would fund the winter carnival. Helping at my aunt's cafe on weekends has shown me the contrast between our busier July days and the quieter Saturdays of February.

Several weekends last winter brought few customer through the door. A carnival could encourage families to visit during that lull, then stop for lunch after skating or looking at ice sculptures. My aunt could contribute a soup special without overhauling the cafe's service. That modest example suggests how an event might fit local businesses rather than merely place another demand on them.

Residents would gain something too. A skating trail, sculptures and sleigh rides offer different ways to participate; someone uncomfortable on skates could still enjoy the weekend with family. A distinctive winter gathering would make the season feel less like a wait for spring.

Weather needs careful planning. Indoor demonstrations and clearly communicated changes could provide alternatives when outdoor activities become unsuitable, although they would not eliminate the risk. A July music festival is appealing. Nevertheless, I would put the funding where, in my own experience, Riverbend has more room for both visitors and community activity.

Why about CLB 11: The response grounds seasonal claims in the writer’s own experience and balances business, participation and weather concerns. “Few customer” has a small plural-form error.

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